Question

近来各种污染非常严重，已经影响了人们的日常生活。假如你是张琳，请你给各界朋友些一封信，说说污染对人们生活造成的影响，并呼吁大家行动起来环境。（开头和结尾一给出，不急入总词数）

影响	1.有各种各样的污染。 2水污染使我们没有足够多的饮用水 3空气污染最严重，我们不得不在室内做各种活动……。
希望	1.出行不开车，改乘公交或骑自行车。 2节约用水，随手关闭水龙头 3都栽树种花，循环利用书纸……。

  要求：表格中每栏已经给出一项内容，其他内容自拟。至少再写出两项。

Dear Friends,

       My name is Zhang Lin. I’m a middle school student ___________________________

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                                                                    Zhang Lin

Answer

Dear Friends,

My name is Zhang Lin. I’m a middle school student. At present, the pollution of our environment is becoming more and more serious. There are all kinds of pollution. The water is polluted so we don’t have enough water to drink. And the air pollution is the worst, which make us can’t do exercise outside. Instead, we have to take activities indoor. Also, the earth gets polluted, and some plants have something bad for our health.

Since the pollution has bad effects on our lives, we must take some methods to deal with it. We can ride or take a bus instead of driving a car. We also need to save water. Besides, we can plant more trees and flowers. They can make the environment more beautiful and cleaner.

I think our environment can be improved.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。题中已经给出了写作的要点和要求。在写作时，要注意要点信息的齐全。文章的各类信息要有效组织起来，并且使用一些过渡性的句子和短语来加强文章的结构。同时，句子表达要完整准确，注意主谓一致和时态等问题。

【亮点分析】这篇文章要点齐全，表达准确流利。文中使用了一些很有用的句型和表达方式，例如：And the air pollution is the worst, which make us can’t do exercise outside.空气污染是最严重的，这使我们不能在户外进行运动；which引导一个非限制性定语从句。Since the pollution has bad effects on our lives, we must take some methods to deal with it.既然污染对我们的生活带来了不好的影响，我们必须采取措施来解决它。Since因为；deal with处理。

考点：提纲类作文。