Question

假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find your own way to learn English”,80个词左右的稿件向其投稿,介绍你学习英语的体会。

稿件开头已给出,不计入总词数。

最初的情况现在的情况学习体会

学习困难单词拼写 听力差 语法出错 阅读速度慢 学习方法 记单元词汇表(vocabulary list) 多听磁带 借书阅读 学好英语的关键专心致志自有方法

Answer

Sample answer

Find Your Own Way to Learn English

There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.

At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example, I couldn't spell some English words, and couldn't understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.

Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.

The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.(118 words)

【解析】第一部分:以前的学习困难(6分)

1) 单词拼写(2分)

2) 听力差(2分)

3) 语法出错(1分)

4) 阅读速度慢(1分)

第二部分:现在的学习方法(6分)

5) 记单元词汇表(2分)

6) 多听磁带(2分)

7) 借书阅读(2分)

第三部分:学好英语的关键:专心致志,自有方法。(3分)

2. 评分标准:共分七档,先确定档次,然后在该档次的上限和下限之间给具体分数。

1) 第一档15分(满分):叙述要点完整、正确,清晰,语言连贯流畅,无语言结构、用词、拼写、标点错误,词数在要求范围之内(60—120个词),完整、清晰、有效地传达了规定的信息。

2) 第二档13—14分:叙述要点完整、正确,清晰,语言较连贯流畅,有个别语言、拼写、标点错误,词数在要求范围之内,有效传达了规定的信息。

3) 第三档10—12分:叙述要点较完整、正确,清晰,语言较连贯流畅,有少量语言、拼写、标点错误,词数在要求范围之内,较有效地传达了规定的信息。

4) 第四档7—9分:内容要点遗漏较多,语言连贯流畅性较差,有多处语言、拼写、标点错误,词数未在要求范围之内,部分传达了规定的信息。

5) 第五档4—6分:表达了少量的内容要点,语言支离破碎,各种错误太多,词数未在要求范围之内,很难传达有效的规定信息。

6) 第六档1—3分:只能用个别或少量的单词表达,无完整的句子,未能传达有用的规定信息。

7) 第七档0分:所写单词或句子均为无效内容,未能传达任何规定的信息。