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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happy I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.

 

第一处:friend→ friends 第二处:it→ one 第三处:that→ which 第四处:father后加for 第五处:He→ I 第六处:去掉the 第七处:if→ when 第八处:after→ later 第九处:gives→ gave 第十处:by→ on 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了我利用业余时间自己挣钱买二手自行车的经历。 第一处:考查名词的数。句意:上高中时,我的大多数朋友都有自行车。most of 后接可数名词复数,故friend改为friends。 第二处:考查one与it的区别。句意:我多希望我也能有一辆(自行车)。one表泛指,替代上文提到过的同类人或事物中的一个,it替代上文中提到过的同一事物,根据句意可知此处用前者,故it改为one。 第三处:考查非限定性定语从句。句意:一天我看到一辆二手自行车,只有一百元。此处为非限定性定语从句,关系词指代先行词a second-hand bicycle(指物),并在从句中作主语,而that不能引导非限定性定语从句,故that改为which。 第四处:考查介词。句意:我向爸爸要钱。ask sb for sth为固定用法,表示“向某人要某物”,故father后加for。 第五处:考查代词。句意:我应该自己负责另一半的费用。空前一句爸爸说他只给我一半的钱,因此我要靠自己挣得另一半的钱,此处表示“我”而不是“他”,故He改为I。 第六处:考查定冠词。句意:于是放学后我去卖报纸。after school是固定用法,表示“放学后”,the是多余的,故去掉the。 第七处:考查从属连词。句意:一个月后我把钱给他看时,爸爸很高兴。根据句意可知此处表示“当……的时候”,应该用when引导时间状语从句,故if改为when。 第八处:考查later与after的区别。句意同上,later是副词,常用于“一段时间+later”结构,表示“……长时间后”,after常作介词,用于“after+时间点/段”结构,也表示“……点/时间之后”,分析句子结构可知此处用前者,故after改为later。 第九处:考查时态。句意:他给了我另外五十元。根据上文可知,陈述是发生在过去的事情,应该用一般过去时,故gives改为gave。 第十处:考查介词。句意:你能想象得到我骑自行车上学时有多开心。by bicycle与on one's bicycle都表示“骑自行车”,根据“my own”可知此处用后者,故by改为on。  
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