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书面表达 学校在评选“朝晖之星”，初一年级的候选人是李薇，请你根据下面的简历写一...

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学校在评选“朝晖之星”，初一年级的候选人是李薇，请你根据下面的简历写一篇50单词的短文介绍她，并根据你对她的了解适当补充其他方面的情况。

Name: Li Wei

Age: 13 Sex: girl

Birthday: September 25th

Class : Five  Grade: Seven

Favorite subjects: science (difficult, interesting)

music (fun, relaxing)

Talents(才艺): sing and dance

Others: …

The Star of Zhaohui Middle School

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Star of Zhaohui Middle School Li Wei is a thirteen-year-old girl. Her birthday is on September 25th. Now she is in Class Five, Grade Seven in Zhaohui Middle School. Science and music are her favorite subjects. She thinks science is difficult but interesting. Music is fun and relaxing. She loves music very much, so she is good at singing and dancing. She wants to be a singer when she grows up. 【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，来介绍一下“朝晖之星”的初一年级候选人是李薇。题目中有关于李薇的具体信息，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。这些信息包括了李薇的年龄、年级、特长等，写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。而且这些关于介绍人物时所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。 写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了李薇，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如动词不定式She wants to be a singer when she grows up.、 合成形容词Li Wei is a thirteen-year-old girl.、介词短语so she is good at singing and dancing、连词She wants to be a singer when she grows up等。  
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