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书面表达。根据下面的表格提示, 写一篇题为“Changes in my home...

书面表达根据下面的表格提示, 写一篇题为“Changes in my home town”的英文短文。

过去

现在

小镇旧房

新城高楼

小商店、没有学校

一家大超市、一所现代化的学校

步行或骑自行车

乘公交车、有私家车

河水清澈

河水污染

要求:

1.所有提示都应在短文中呈现,可适当发挥,须对发生的变化谈谈自己的感受;

2.词数:80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。

Changes in my hometown

Over the past few years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.

In the past, ________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

 

Changes in my hometown As time goes by, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there are many old houses. But now we have many high beautiful buildings. People used to live in the small and dirty rooms. But now they have moved into new flat, which is big and comfortable. People go to work by bus or by car instead of on foot or by bike. There is a river in my hometown. It used to be very dirty while it is clear now. Now wide road has taken the place of the narrow street. And cars on the road become more and more. My hometown has become more and more beautiful. I love my hometown.    【解析】 试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以Changes in my hometown为题,讲述一下自己家乡发生的变化。题目给了我们一个表格,显示了家乡过去和现在的变化。主要有以下几个方面,一是人们居住条件的变化;二是人们上班的交通方式上的变化;三是居住环境的变化。我们要从这几个方面,利用对比的方式,把家乡发生的这些变化用正确的英语表达出来。因此我们要特别注意过去和现在的一个对比,我们可以使用一些短语,例如used to, instead of, in the past, now等。同时要注意使用正确的时态,现在时和过去时混合使用。多使用好的句型句式,使文章表达连贯、流畅。 写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先这篇短文的结构很清楚,分成了三段,第一段是开头,点明主题;第二段是文章的中心,对比家乡过去和现在的变化;第三段是一个总结和作者的感想。有头有尾,层次分明。在文章的主体部分,作者主要使用了对比的方法,从题目中要求的几个方面,把家乡发生的变化描述了出来。并且特别注意了表达相似意思的时候,尽量不使用重复的句型。如说到过去的时候,用了in the past和used to;提到现在时,用了now。短文中时态、人称使用准确,用到了一般过去时、一般现在时和现在完成时。文章中好的句型有As time goes by, great changes have taken place in my hometown、they have moved into new flat, which is big and comfortable、People go to work by bus or by car instead of on foot or by bike等。  
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